shesmackshard's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bitting Booty]

Interesting Instrumentation

I dont think Ive personally heard a harp type sound in techno and i cant decide if it fits or not.

Its a very happy song. Well, simply put and to keep me from sound like Im nagging, its written pretty well and the progressions fit well.

Sounds like something from a games Shop or somethin haha.

Anyway, now for the mixing/EQ.

This is VERY, VERY muddy. You need far more highs and mids in this mix. The high-end of bass frequencies are a-plenty, and thats not good. Very

Pretty decent otherwise, its interesting. Not typical techno,but Im rating a song based on the song, not the genre its placed.

9/10 5/5

I appreciate a review as well if you have the time man

Cuzone responds:

Both the highs and lows are perfect. The problem is in the EQ of the bass itself, not the mixing of the whole song.

[Sini - What's Up Doc]

Lol interesting intro dude

Intro is nice lol, creative. When the song begins to break down a bit, its pretty neat. the sequence is pretty hot, for sure. Im impressed with that bassline.

There needs to be way more highs on the kick drum, and the some of the synths are muddy (too much bass, clashes with the kicks).

To be honest this isnt typical trance. Its very progressive for sure, and the effects that you use are pretty neat. But JUST when a sequence is built up, you create a new one. Careful not to sound too progressive to the point where something potentially epic gets boring really quick.

The effects are really nice as I said, and the writing is nice. I suggest more attention on the mixing and on the progressivism. other than that, nice track.

I give it 8/10 5/5

I appreciate reviews if you can bro, thanks

DjSini responds:

tnx man
i appreciate your review :)

[SnowStorm (techno)]

Hmmm

Has a lot of potential in that sequence for sure. Good luck on the final version.

The kick drum needs more highs in the mix, and turn up that pluck synth you have.

This song does not deserve a fucking 2. People only see the product uploaded and dont bother trying to help. Fuck the guy below me, thats such a fucking dickhead statement, everyONE and every SONG starts somewhere.

Definitely add a lead to the song, and I suggest turning the tempo up at least 10bpm.

Turn the snare and high hat up as well.

I suggest some sort of pad in the background, and add a part where the drums have variation and perhaps go much faster.

Just throwing out ideas here.

7/10 4/5

Id appreciate a review on something if you have the time bro. thanks

Pokemeon responds:

dude i appreciate the effort you took review my tune and ill be sure to do the same bud. Also ill definitely pay attention to your suggestions, but i didn't understand the part were you said the the drums need more highs? didn't you mean like a higher tempo?

[out of this world ver.3]

Nice bassline for sure

This is a very nice sequence, and the piano is a nice effect.

Not an incredible fan of that one FLS pad you used (Nightmare is it called?). Not sure but, pretty decent overall. Nice subwoofer song.

The kick drum needs a little less bass to keep from meshing badly from the bassline, and more highs to stand out in the mix.

Overall, its decent, just needs way more variation. But good job man.

I appreciate it if you review a song of mine too bro.

8/10 5/5

majer responds:

as i noted this is not the final mix so you can expect to here more variations of this one soon thanks for the kind words and glad it was able to tickle your subs properly

the pads i used were actually a couple of hits one was toilings and the screams are called screamers

[Nightmares And Solitude]

Well done!

Nice and ambient indeed man. Very nice sequences and the instrumentation meshes perfectly. Very good job bro.

Mixing and EQ? The master needs more highs. Thats about it, man. Well done in this area too.

10/10 5/5

Nitrocore responds:

Thanks for the review, I appreciate it and thanks for listening :)

[M13 -suburban Whale- (demo)]

Nice bro!

Haha nice title.

The beat is nice and the effects work well. I personally think you need some more variation would work well, but thats all up to you. I dont listen to DnB much.

As far as mixing and EQ its seems to all be tip-top shape, for once today here on newgrounds lol :)

9/10 5/5

I appreciate reviews if you have time bro :)

Lmao nice vocal sample dude.

Monster13 responds:

i definitely need some more variation in this song, I just had writers block and wanted to get a demo out.

This is also my first dubstep song, so its a bit of a learning experience for me and i'm glad you liked the vocal xD

thx for the review

[FragmentsOfMemories(T.O.F)]

Reminds me of Phantasy Star a lot

Very nice melodies, good for background music IMO, as I said it reminds me a LOT of phantasy star episode I &II for Gamecub.

but yeah my only complaint is that your mixing is muddy. It needs more highs on your Master EQ. Less bass on the synths and such, and way more highs on your kick drums. Its getting lost in the mix

But decent song. Good job man :)

9/10 5/5

Id appreciate reviews if you have time :)

TheOnlyFool responds:

Tit for tat, il review some of your things when I get the time

[braznew 2 0 2 c]

Nice sample work

Screw that 7 vote, its a very nice loop dude. Great work. The mixing and EQ however needs a lot of work. Its very muddy. Simply add some highs to the master EQ and it should help enough, but the low piano end stuff needs less bass too. Its meshing with the kick drum a bit on my subs.

Just some tips I thought I'd throw out there. But its your song I have different preferences :) Great loop bro

Id appreciate any reviews you can give me if you have time :)

10/10 5/5

trancedatlantic responds:

Thanks man. I have Sony Stereo Monitor headphones when creating, and I listen to the songs in my car and on the laptop. Always appreciate another ear.

[Hardstyle Angels 2 {Dj-Abbic}]

Nice stuff

9/10 4/5

Decent mixing, could use a little more high EQ in the mixing on the synths, and maybe so thicker/heavier compression. It is indeed electronica.

But yeah, good stuff :)

Id appreciate a review if you have the time :)

DjAbbic responds:

Sure :D Thanks for the review

[No Cover Song Rmx Demo]

Nice mixing

9/10 5/5

Good stuff, not sure remixes are allowed haha, I had to get rid of mine. But nice stuff. Definitely a good dance track, and a good remix.

Id appreciate if you can review some of my stuff

UniqueBounce responds:

thx dude ...