shesmackshard's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[One Step]

Im feelin this

Very nice effects, and it sounds like samples were used on some vocals, i think. So very well - very well - pulled off, mixed perfectly. Im impressed man.

Good track.

10/10 5/5
Could ya review my new track Prftk.Tempo, or maybe SmxHard?

[D-Face - Like Old Times]

Nice dude!

Very nice atmosphere man, hopefully this gets more appreciation. I didnt look but if you're new-ish around here, dont sweat votes. NG voting system is bullshit especially before reviews really start flowing in.

This is very chill, IMO, and very well orchestrated, and at that - very well mixed. Im impressed. Definitely pulled this one off. Favorited, and I'll keep an eye on your shit, hopefully you do the same for me.

Excellenty atmosphere again, respect.

10/10 5/5

d00dfayz responds:

Thank you. I'll be sure to take a look at your stuff.
By the way, I am not new here at all.

[Space Station Pause Screen]

Ooo, definitely sounds like a pause

Thats some good use of atmosphere man. Very well thought out, and would match perfectly for a pause. Impressed.

If this was an actual fullscale song Id say your EQ on the synth could use less bass but it adds a small atmosphere effect to the mix in this case. I cant tell whether it loops properly, but otherwise good shit man

10/10 5/5

Could ya review my new track Prftk.Tempo, or maybe SmxHard?

[A small moment of Techno]

Now lets see here :D

What you have so far, is an epic sequence, with a very low drumtrack.

This could be the up there with the big dogs if your drumtrack was wayyyyyy more present, and mixed well. Because your sequences are very catchy, they just need more mixing/EQ attention.

I say turn the drums up, Mix them well, and add a master hard limiter to really bring out everything. It is electronica afterall.

The bassline could use a little less Freqs around 70hz and below. But yeah, very nice writing.

10/10 5/5 for the wip.

Keep it up bro

Could ya review my new track Prftk.Tempo, or maybe SmxHard?

[All that matters(Jze remix)]

Dude, nice

Oh now thats a really nice sequence, this has countless potential. Seriously, all you need to focus on is more effects and EQ/Mixing ya know? I think the only thing that needs some more EQ is the bass synth, add some highs to it so it stands out more in the mix. Maybe even a master EQ with more highs on everything.

The effects you used is pretty damn good man for sure. And the vocals match really well. Props. Maybe make them louder though.

If this is a completed project and you're unwilling to edit a little, 9.5/10, but I'll assume you're down with future work at some point.

Major respect, epic work. 10/10 5/5

Could ya review my new track Prftk.Tempo, or maybe SmxHard?

[-Grieg- Techno Mix]

Cool man

Pretty cool sequence, haha gotta love it.

The kick needs far less bass and more highs to stand out in the mix. To create a nice relationship between the synths and drums you should consider adding a master hard limiter, and maybe a sidechain on your lead. But yeah, pretty cool.

Cant complain much
9/10 5/5

Could ya review my new song Prfkt.Tempo?

Nakisima responds:

Cheers man, I used GarageBand so my choice of editing is pretty limited. I'll see what I can do with my other songs, but I'm not going to waste time editing this one to be honest. Sure I'll review yours since you took time to review mine!

-Nakisima

[[RM] - Hovering Above WIP2]

Well hey!

Nice sequence, very chill and ambient. I like it, and the synth itself sounds good.

No major complaints bro, simple. Good job, keep it up. Respect.
10/10 5/5

Could ya review my new song Prfkt.Tempo?

Randomizor responds:

Thanks, I might go check that out soon. :P

[Sunstruck {DEMO}]

Nice man

Good sequences for sure.

You should use a sidechain on your main sequence. Just an idea though.

Your drums need to be mixed much louder. Add some duplicated clap channels then make them stereo, so that everything is so centered. Also an opinion though. Or, a personal preference.

Pretty cool though 9/10 5/5

Could ya review my new song Prfkt.Tempo?

[Implosion of a Dream]

Nice

Well written, almost seems like this would be better orchestrated that with synth pads. Regardless its good writing.

Nice drumtrack, fits well.

Not sure whether or not you intended the muffled effect on the song? If not, you need a lot more highs on pretty much everything

The sequence that comes in about half way through, is too dissonant to play with the hook you have going, so wait for the break before you drop that new sequence (IMO)

But yeah, 9/10 5/5

Could ya review my new song Prfkt.Tempo?

raving2thegrave responds:

Thanks for the review, I've noted your criticism of the parts for future songs.

And I will most definitely check out your song.

[Ecstasy]

Nice writing! :D

Excellent drumtrack. You should create a clone of the hats and clap, and make one of each of them completely stereo, while the other still centered. It'll really bring out the drums more, so that everything isnt sitting on the center channel.

Overall on the drum mixing, they need to be a decent bit louder.

That sequence that comes in about a 1/4 through is impressive, I like that a lot.

The strings you have in the beginning are deceptive because it seems like a slow song then you drop the beat, its neat.

On the master EQ I would add a little bit more high freqs to make it crisper, but thats just IMO.

As for the effects, not a whole lot of effects. If nothing else you should use a hard limiter on it, and maybe a side chain on a bassline. But at lease use a hard limiter, it'll bring the mix up nice and thick.

Just my opinions mostly, but regardless, nice writing.

10/10 5/5

ParadoxInc responds:

Thanks Man :)